A blackbird made by The Sisters during Days of the Blackbird |
"There's a poem by Wallace Stevens titled Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird. The first time I introduced it to a class, I ended up asking them to chose an object (not a quality, like "love") and, following Stevens's example and their own imaginations, see how many ways they could look at that object (at least 7); using figures of speech, etc."Want to give it a try? First read Wallace Stevens' poem, next read The Teacher's poem and finally click comment and write your own!
IAmong twenty snowy mountains,The only moving thingWas the eye of the blackbird.III was of three minds,Like a treeIn which there are three blackbirds.IIIThe blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.It was a small part of the pantomime.IVA man and a womanAre one.A man and a woman and a blackbirdAre one.VI do not know which to prefer,The beauty of inflectionsOr the beauty of innuendoes,The blackbird whistlingOr just after.VIIcicles filled the long windowWith barbaric glass.The shadow of the blackbirdCrossed it, to and fro.The moodTraced in the shadowAn indecipherable cause.VIIO thin men of Haddam,Why do you imagine golden birds?Do you not see how the blackbirdWalks around the feetOf the women about you?VIIII know noble accentsAnd lucid, inescapable rhythms;But I know, too,That the blackbird is involvedIn what I know.IXWhen the blackbird flew out of sight,It marked the edgeOf one of many circles.XAt the sight of blackbirdsFlying in a green light,Even the bawds of euphonyWould cry out sharply.XIHe rode over ConnecticutIn a glass coach.Once, a fear pierced him,In that he mistookThe shadow of his equipageFor blackbirds.XIIThe river is moving.The blackbird must be flying.XIIIIt was evening all afternoon.It was snowingAnd it was going to snow.The blackbird satIn the cedar-limbs.
Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Willowby Lynn Barrett (The Teacher)
I
Willow weeps
With a war-weary world.
II
O Willow, why do you weep?
Ophelia floats peacefully
In the stream.
III
O Willow, why do you weep?
Listen to the laughter
Of children playing
Inside the tent of your branches.
IV
The willow is a maiden
With tempest-tossed tresses
Troubling the tangled turf.
V
The willow is a fountain
Of yellow-green droplets
Filtering the slanting rays
Of the morning sun.
VI
Squirrels chase each other
Through the willow tree.
Her limbs sway and bend.
They do not break.
VII
In the heat of noontime,
A nightingale -
Nodding,
Napping -
Nestles in the cool green niches
Of the willow.
VIII
The sting of the willow-switch whipping
Will soon pass.
Not so
The deeper wound.
IX
In the gray-green of evening,
The willow whispers wistfully
To the winnowing wind.
X
What night nuances
Lure me to the moon-made shadows
Of the willow?
XI
Whitened with winter,
The willow waits willingly
For spring.
Now is a time of rest.
XII
The rivulet runs;
The robin returns;
The bluebell blooms:
The willow wakes.
XIII
Her roots probed deep
To find life-giving water.
Still the willow thirsts.
Now Dear Books for Walls Reader -it is your turn, pick your object and write your poem then post it in the comments below. We understand if you feel shy and do not want to post it --in that case just post in the comments that you did take the Thirteen Ways to Look at _______ Challenge. And Happy National Poetry Month!
It is a rainy day and perfect for writing poetry. This morning The Sisters, The Mom and Uncle Chris took on the assignment together --these poems are a blast to brainstorm in a group! And here is what we came up with. (Thank your beautiful Teacher, this is an amazing assignment!)
ReplyDeleteThirteen Ways of Looking at a Tent Worm Caterpillar
by The Big Sister, The Little Sister, The Mom, and Uncle Chris
I
A lazy camper in its tent
comes out answering
nature's call.
II
Little hungry bears waking
up from their slumber.
III
Creepy creepers constantly crawl.
IV
Covering the ground like carpet;
this is no time for bare feet.
V
An explosion,
a murder,
cold caterpillar guts on your feet,
a child feels guilty.
VI
Living bark moving,
eating caterpillars growing,
fractured leaves plummet,
feces falling in your face,
covering the porch like coffee grounds.
VII
Caterpillars getting fatter by the minutes
(Imagine: green guts growing!)
VIII
As the caterpillar feast
the trees say
goodbye
to their spring tender foliage.
IX
Sliding down on their silk like
firemen
sliding down
on their pole.
X
Then they hurry like firemen
heading to a fire.
But they are looking for
a place to make a cocoon.
XI
Many die,
but still they try.
XII
Finally protected (hopefully)
carefully in a comfortable cocoon
to rest,
to grow,
to change,
to become.
XIII
A beautiful moth
takes flight,
heading for something
bright
bright
bright.
Mom, Big Sister, Little Sister, and Uncle Chris:
ReplyDeleteEXCELLENT!